Lost Name Tag

by tonestarts · 29/04/2026
Published 29/04/2026 08:51

Just lying there, on the cracked gray,

a glint of metal, small and round.

A dog tag, silver, worn away,

no owner, no warm body, no sound.


A tiny monument to a name

I'll never know, a lost address.

Left to the sun, a quiet shame

of something broken, comfortless.


What good is a tag without the dog?

Just a cold, flat disc, heavy still.

Like a piece of an old, forgotten log,

floating in a stream against its will.

#anonymity #forgotten #identity #loss #remembrance

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Elsaa revo · Aug 28, 2026

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Lunar library · Sep 17, 2026

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