The shower went lukewarm then a biting sudden chill

by tenderhugo · 20/11/2025
Published 20/11/2025 15:32

The shower went lukewarm, then a biting, sudden chill.

I found the flashlight and took the stairs slow,

down where the air is a different country,

heavy with the scent of wet concrete and silt.


It smells like cardboard boxes that have given up,

their glue softening in the perpetual damp.

There is a hint of rust from the old furnace,

and the slow, sweet rot of a potato left in a bin

back when the seasons actually changed down here.


I reached for the pull-chain, the bare bulb swaying,

casting a circle of yellow on the gray floor.

You can’t hide a house’s history in the attic;

it all eventually leaks down into the dark,

waiting to be inhaled like a dusty, forgotten chore.

#decay #domestic decay #memory #nostalgia #urban decay

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