Clocking Out

by tenderhugo · 09/02/2026
Published 09/02/2026 14:58

The metal gate is rattled shut and locked.

My hands are numb from the frozen peas and the bags of ice,

and my skin smells like the inside of a walk-in,

that sharp, metallic scent of freezer burn and wet cardboard.


I’m standing on the loading dock where the light is yellow.

I pull the phone out to check the time and find the text,

four lines of blue ink on a white screen

telling me that we’ve run out of ways to make it work.


The glow hits a puddle of slush by my boots,

shimmering over pallet splinters and a crushed soda can.

I’m too tired to even drop the phone.

I just stand there in the 11:15 air,

wondering if the smell of the warehouse

will ever wash off my neck.

#alienation #dehumanization #industrial labor #working class fatigue

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