The Metal Edge

by tenderhugo · 12/02/2026
Published 12/02/2026 19:06

I had to catch the number before the tone died,

scribbling the digits on the back of a bill.

I messed up the seven, I shouldn't have tried

to write while the world was refusing to stay still.


I flipped the wood over to rub out the line,

but the pink nub was gone, just a hardened old stone.

It didn't fix anything, didn't look fine,

just scratched at the paper and left it alone.


The metal ferrule left a grey, ugly scar,

a permanent mess where the truth used to be.

Now the mistake is the brightest thing by far,

and there isn't a way to go back and be free.

#regret

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