The First Salt

by tenderhugo · 07/03/2026
Published 07/03/2026 15:58

The fluorescent hum in the bathroom is a clinical light.

It catches on a wire that doesn't belong,

a bright, unyielding stitch of white

curling away from the temple, stubborn and strong.


I reached for the tweezers on the porcelain ledge,

where they sat by the soap in a cold, metal heap.

I gripped that single strand right at the edge

of the skin where the secrets of aging keep.


It’s a different texture, coarse as a thread

from an old wool coat that’s starting to fray.

A quiet defector from the rest of my head,

telling me the clock has been ticking all day.

#aging #bodily change #mortality #self reflection

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