Commuter's Alms

by Theo · 02/12/2025
Published 02/12/2025 12:29

The 4-train was a humid, silver lung

breathing us in and out at every stop.

I felt invisible, a shadow hung

from a plastic strap, waiting for the drop.


A woman with a coat of thrift-store wool

reached out and pressed a bar into my palm.

It was half-eaten, a jagged, honeyed pull

of oats and raisins—a strange, quiet psalm.


She was gone before the doors could hiss and shut.

I looked at the wrapper, crinkled and thin,

and the clear marks of teeth where she’d taken a cut.

It’s a terrible thing, to be suddenly seen.

#commuter life #invisibility #poverty #urban alienation

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