Commuter's Alms
by Theo
· 02/12/2025
Published 02/12/2025 12:29
The 4-train was a humid, silver lung
breathing us in and out at every stop.
I felt invisible, a shadow hung
from a plastic strap, waiting for the drop.
A woman with a coat of thrift-store wool
reached out and pressed a bar into my palm.
It was half-eaten, a jagged, honeyed pull
of oats and raisins—a strange, quiet psalm.
She was gone before the doors could hiss and shut.
I looked at the wrapper, crinkled and thin,
and the clear marks of teeth where she’d taken a cut.
It’s a terrible thing, to be suddenly seen.