The Five-Fifteen Sweep

by Theo · 24/12/2025
Published 24/12/2025 17:42

At 5:15 the diesel engine coughs a thick gray lung

and the headlights carve a path across my ceiling.

I’m wide awake, feeling old and unstrung,

while the neighborhood keeps its rhythm and its feeling.


He’s out there now in the pre-dawn blue,

wiping the condensation with a gloved palm.

He has a destination, a thing he must do,

while I’m stuck here in this jagged, airless calm.


He clears a small porthole in the glass,

a crescent of clarity against the cold.

I watch the ghost of his taillights pass,

tracking a story that never gets told.

#commuter fatigue #early morning #existential loneliness #urban isolation

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