The Unraveling Point

by Jonah Mercer · 23/11/2025
Published 23/11/2025 14:39

I’m folding the shirts on the kitchen table,

stacking the colors in wobbly rows.

This one is losing its brand-name label,

and the collar is soft where the fraying shows.


I pulled at a thread on the left-hand cuff

and watched the seam start to bunch and pucker.

The fabric is getting thin and rough,

the kind of trap for a sentimental sucker.


There are little white pills in the armpit fold,

gathered like grit in a tired machine.

It’s the weight of a body, getting old,

leaving its mark on everything clean.

#aging #body #domestic life #material decay #memory #sentimental

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