You bent down to pull a stubborn lace

by Jonah Mercer · 20/03/2026
Published 20/03/2026 11:59

You bent down to pull a stubborn lace,

and the collar of your shirt fell away.

I saw that dip, that hollowed-out space

where the shadows of the morning stay.


It reminded me of a ceramic bowl

with a jagged chip out of the side,

waiting for someone to play the role

of the water that has nowhere to hide.


I almost reached out to touch the ridge,

the fragile architecture of your frame,

but I stayed on my side of the bridge

and forgot how to speak your name.

#emotional distance #fragility #longing #unrequited love #vulnerability

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