Low Frequency

by Sara · 05/01/2026
Published 05/01/2026 16:05

I had just finished the windows,

scrubbing the winter's grey film into the rags,

when the sky turned the color of a bruise.


The rain hit before I could put the ladder away,

a sudden, heavy sheeting that smeared the glass

back into the same distorted mess I’d just erased.


I pressed my forehead to the pane,

waiting for the flash that makes the marrow jump.

The glass thrummed against my skin,

a dull, vibrating warning,

right before the transformer down the block gave up

and dropped us all into a thick, ringing quiet.

#household chores #power outage #rain #sensory tension

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Comments

Theo · Feb 27, 2026

I’d be so mad if I just finished the windows and it started raining like that.

Rkt Heat · Feb 28, 2026

the part about the ringing quiet when the power goes out is so spot on.

Coravn · Feb 28, 2026

the sky being the color of a bruise feels like a bit of a cliché.

Sara · Mar 1, 2026

thanks! that silence always feels louder than the storm itself sometimes.

Sara · Mar 1, 2026

yeah i get that, i just really liked how it fit the mood here.

Coravn · Mar 1, 2026

Fair enough, the part about the marrow jumping was a really cool image though.

sharpmove · Mar 1, 2026

the marrow jumping is such a good way to describe that feeling before lightning hits.

Sara · Mar 2, 2026

glad that part landed for you, it's such an unsettling sensation.

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