Compound Interest

by Sara · 29/04/2026
Published 29/04/2026 08:35

The pickle jar lid wouldn't budge an inch

so I leaned in with the weight of my shoulder.

That’s when I saw the thumb joint flinch

and the knuckle look suddenly forty years older.


It’s his hand. The same hitch in the bone,

the same stubborn refusal to open or bend.

I didn't just get his temper or his tone;

I got the way his mechanics start to end.


Under the bed, the shoebox is full of the rest:

invoices yellowed and brittle with his name.

I’m paying for a heart that failed the test

with a body that’s learning to fail the same.

#aging #caregiving #familial duty #financial burden #mortality

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Elsaa revo · Aug 28, 2026

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