Carbon Copy

by Sara · 10/01/2026
Published 10/01/2026 16:52

The pen is a Bic with a chewed-up cap,

dragging a dry ball across the bill for the heat.

I’m forcing the ink to bridge the gap

between the hunger and what’s left to eat.


I press so hard the table takes the scar,

a ghost-list etched into the heavy wood.

It’s a jagged map of how things really are,

written deeper than a screen ever could.


Milk, bread, and the heavy weight of bread,

scarred into the grain like a permanent debt.

It stays behind long after the words are read,

a physical groove that hasn't vanished yet.

#hunger #materiality #permanence #poverty #writing

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Comments

intimatesound · Jan 23, 2026

chewed up pen caps are kind of gross

Coil · Jan 23, 2026

i'm not really feeling the part about the table being scarred

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