Second Story

by faintnaomi · 03/11/2025
Published 03/11/2025 16:47

The tile is colder than I remember.

It’s 2:00 AM and the refrigerator hums

like a low, steady headache.


I see my face in the microwave glass,

dark and blurred,

and for a second it is my father’s jaw,

his heavy, tired mouth

waiting for the water to boil.


The boxes are still stacked high

by the basement door.

They smell like dust and the trunk of a car.

I’m just a guest in a room

where I used to know where the light switch was

without having to feel for the wall.

#alienation #domestic space #father #memory #nostalgia

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Comments

longaccumulating · Feb 11, 2026

the fridge humming part is the only bit that really clicked with me.

faintnaomi · Feb 11, 2026

glad that part landed at least! it's a very specific kind of quiet.

Ash · Feb 14, 2026

Honestly that part about having to feel for the wall for the light switch hits so hard.

he8nix · Feb 15, 2026

i didn't really care for the part about his father's jaw.

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