Threshold

by faintnaomi · 04/11/2025
Published 04/11/2025 18:04

He’s wearing the shirt with the grease on the cuff.

I guess I had finally given it up.

The cotton is thin and the color has bled.

He’s walking the path that I already tread.


I look at his feet in the hall by the door.

His sneakers are slanted, just hitting the floor.

The rubber is gone on the edge of the heel.

I know how the tilting and grinding must feel.


I carved out the ruts in the dirt of the yard.

I made all the easy things look like they’re hard.

He follows the slope that I left in the clay,

just wearing my ghost at the end of the day.

#aging #inheritance #legacy #physical exhaustion

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Comments

Owen Harlow · Mar 13, 2026

The part about the sneakers hitting the floor is so real.

faintnaomi · Mar 13, 2026

thanks! i feel like i spend way too much time looking at old shoes lately lol

pedor · Mar 13, 2026

The grease on the cuff is a good detail

faintnaomi · Mar 14, 2026

thank you! that shirt is actually sitting in my hamper right now haha

Miguel Couto · Mar 16, 2026

The part about the ruts in the dirt was alright.

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