The Drive Home

by quickmara · 01/01/2026
Published 01/01/2026 16:07

We sat in the car until the engine ticked itself cold.

The garage door was a white, blank wall

covered in spiderwebs and dirt.

He didn't reach for the keys.


His thumbs were hooked over the wheel,

pressed so hard the knuckles went white,

those thick, work-worn pads of skin

just holding onto the leather like it was a ledge.


I wanted to ask if he was hungry,

but the quiet was a physical thing in the seat,

sitting between us like a third passenger

who wasn't ready to get out.

#domestic routine #emotional distance #relational tension #silence #unspoken desire

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Comments

Tnort · Mar 3, 2026

the engine ticking bit was cool but i couldn't really get into the rest.

Pjrel · Mar 5, 2026

That line about the silence being a third passenger really hits.

Coil · Mar 8, 2026

didn't really vibe with this but the garage door description was alright.

Lorimia · Mar 9, 2026

The silence being like a third passenger is such a cool way to describe that feeling.

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