Saturation Point

by quickmara · 22/03/2026
Published 22/03/2026 13:48

The rain came down in sheets of lead,

so I ducked through the heavy oak doors

and sat in the back row where it smelled like floor wax.

I didn't have anything to say to the ceiling.


Downstairs, in the basement, the kettle whistled.

A woman in a cardigan handed me a styrofoam cup,

the steam rising up to hit my cold nose.

I watched the white granules hit the surface,

a miniature storm of sugar spinning down,

vanishing into the bitter brown heat

until there was nothing left to see.

#domestic routine #melancholy #rain #solitude

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