Edges Raw

by Caleb · 23/11/2025
Published 23/11/2025 17:47

Sticky strands stick to my fingers,

a slow drip from a tired forehead,

soft hair torn from sweat and sickness.

I lean close,

catching the wet heat,

and pull it back.


You don’t ask for this help,

the fever hides your voice,

but I can’t look away.

The faint weight of your breath

presses against the dark room.


Your eyes close,

and my hands tremble,

knowing this is the first time

I held something

I can’t fix.

#caregiving #emotional intimacy #helplessness #illness

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