Across the coffee shop loud and bright and crude
by Eli Baird
· 02/01/2026
Published 02/01/2026 18:23
Across the coffee shop, loud and bright and crude,
you sat there, unaware, and utterly glued
to your phone, or a thought, I couldn't tell which.
Then you tapped your pen, just a tiny, soft glitch.
Against your front tooth, a specific, dull sound,
and my entire brain just hit the ground.
Like a tripped circuit breaker, or a sudden, hard reset.
And all I could think was, 'I haven't met
such brilliance, such casual grace.'
This tap-tap-tap, in this ordinary place.
My own jaw felt stupid, my eyes, a wide stare.
Over a pen tap, just a whisper of air.
I ordered another latte, for god's sake, why?
Just to sit longer, under that impossible sky
of your small, unconscious habit. And I knew,
right then, I was sunk. Absolutely, stupidly, through.