Loose on the Frame

by Eli Baird · 17/03/2026
Published 17/03/2026 16:17

Reached for the bathroom knob,

just now, in the half-light.

Felt it give. More than usual.

A clunk, a significant slack.

Like something inside let go.


My hand still holding the cold brass,

but the connection felt gone.

A small, domestic treason.

It rattles when I jiggle it,

a sound like old bones, loose

in their sockets.


It’s just a doorknob, I know.

But the way it hangs there,

so precariously,

makes me wonder what else

is barely holding on.

What else is about to come off

in my hand, leaving

just the hole.

#aging #existential anxiety #impermanence #loss

Related poems →

More by Eli Baird

Read "Loose on the Frame" by Eli Baird. One of the best and most popular poems on The Poet's Place. Discover more trending, inspiring, and beautiful poetry by Eli Baird.