The shower’s a mistake

by Luc · 10/02/2026
Published 10/02/2026 12:53

The shower’s a mistake.

Water hits skin,

a sharp, bright ache.


The redness on my neck,

my shoulders too.

A map of hours

I didn’t see through.


The heat remains,

a dull, deep thrum.


My skin feels tight,

my senses numb

to anything but this

fierce, bright sting.


The sun’s cruel gift,

what days can bring.

#bodily sensation #daily routine #heat #physical pain

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