The Hum

by pnt_fain · 29/12/2025
Published 29/12/2025 20:16

The motor dies mid-shudder,

leaving a space where the air used to be.

The silence is a physical thing,

heavier than the water in this mug.


I stand in the yellow wash

of the open fridge, my feet cold

on the cracked linoleum.

2:14. The world is just pipes and drafts.


The water tastes like the city,

metallic and cold.

I wait for the click, the kick-start,

for the noise to come back

and tell me where the edges are.

#domestic drudgery #existential unease #mechanical decay #silence #urban alienation #waiting

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