Rough Cut

by pnt_fain · 13/02/2026
Published 13/02/2026 09:25

The cedar’s gone a soggy shade of black

where the winter ice has forced a narrow crack.

I held the hammer with a shaky grip

and let the heavy, rusted metal slip.


A crooked nail head weeps a bitter streak

against the grain that’s grown so thin and weak.

The house I built is leaning to the side,

with nowhere left for anything to hide.


It won’t survive the coming of the sleet.

I feel the frost begin to claim my feet.

I thought I made a thing that meant to stay,

but gravity has found a slower way.

#human frailty #impermanence #mortality #nature indifference

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