Tin Can Holding Breath
by Nvmhug
· 20/03/2026
Published 20/03/2026 18:39
That hollow clink beneath the snow—
a tin can, battered and bent,
its jagged lips poke through frost,
like a mouth gasping air it never meant.
Sunlight hits rusted dents,
sharp edges cold against white,
yet inside, silence holds tight,
a breath caught between day and night.
Forgotten, tossed aside,
a vessel cracked but still there,
waiting for a voice to shake it loose,
or maybe just waiting for the cold air.
Snow softens, but it won’t dissolve
this stubborn thing pressed to the earth—
a quiet weight, a hollow sound,
a beat suspended just before birth.