Breaking under weight

by Mior · 26/02/2026
Published 26/02/2026 10:07

The snap was a clean thing,

a sharp crack

against the hum of afternoon.


Blue plastic, faded like forgotten jeans,

clenched on wet cotton,

then just gave up,

split like tired skin.


Fingers still tangled in the line,

I held the pieces—half of a moment,

weight too much, no warning,

and the world just moved on.

#burden #emotional collapse #everyday life #fragility

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