The Second Layer

by faintnaomi · 08/11/2025
Published 08/11/2025 12:25

The aisle smells like aloe and plastic.

A man in a tank top

has shoulders the color of a brick,

his heat reaching toward the cold medicine.


I remember the creek,

the way the water didn't feel like a warning.

By Tuesday, my back was a sheet

of wet, gray paper.


I sat on the edge of the bed

and watched the skin come away.

Small, clear flakes

settled on my blue shirt like salt,

drifting off a body

that didn't want its own roof anymore.

#bodily decay #illness #medical environment #mortality #transformation

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