The Debt

by faintnaomi · 15/01/2026
Published 15/01/2026 19:57

The clouds have pulled their curtains back

to let the Tuesday light come in.

The driveway has a drying crack.

The air is smelling sweet and thin.


He’s standing by the porch’s edge

with yellow plastic in his grip.

I made a vague and heavy pledge

that’s starting, now, to lose its slip.


A single bubble, round and slow,

descends to meet his canvas shoe.

It doesn't pop or let him go.

It sits there, waiting for the blue.

#debt #domestic life #existential burden #promise #waiting

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