The Window in the Bag

by faintnaomi · 04/03/2026
Published 04/03/2026 19:32

The bag is too heavy for what’s inside.

I didn't want to use a plate

or find a chair.

The salt is sharp and white

on the edges of the fold.


The oil is moving through the brown

turning it into a window,

showing me the scratches on the counter

that I forgot were there.

It's a wet kind of transparency

that says I’m finished before I start.

#burden #domestic life #existential doubt #self reflection #stagnation

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