The Ticking

by quickmara · 20/01/2026
Published 20/01/2026 14:47

It started out subtle, a metallic click-click

every time the wheel hit the pavement.

I thought it was just a stone in the tread,

something the road would spit out.


But the steering wheel started to pull to the left.

I pulled onto the gravel, the dust thick and dry,

and found the silver head of a roofing nail

buried deep in the heavy, black wall.


I leaned my head close and I heard the sound,

a tiny, wet hiss like a secret being told.

The tire was giving its spirit away,

slowly settling down into the dirt.

#anxiety #fragility #hidden danger #impermanence #mechanical breakdown

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