Thinner Air

by quickmara · 31/01/2026
Published 31/01/2026 13:55

The engine died and the world rushed in—

the crickets, the neighbor’s AC, the dark.

I walked around the back,

knees clicking after twelve hours

on the loading dock.


The rhythmic ticking is finally over.

I found it buried in the third groove,

a galvanized nail hammered home

by three miles of hot asphalt.


The head is worn to a silver mirror,

polished by the road,

holding the breath of the tire

by a lucky, jagged thread.

#existential dread #industrial labor #mechanical decay #working class fatigue

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