The hallway is a swamp of steam

by Znmin · 03/03/2026
Published 03/03/2026 18:50

The hallway is a swamp of steam

and the sharp, fake scent of eucalyptus.

You left without a word again,

just a door clicking shut in the dark.


My foot finds the heavy dampness

of the towel you dropped by the tub.

The cold cotton soaks into my sock,

a wet map of your indifference.


I stand in the dark with one wet foot

waiting for the water in the pipes

to stop its rattling scream.

#abandonment #domestic life #emotional neglect #loneliness #waiting

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