Metal memories

by Rzzen · 22/04/2026
Published 22/04/2026 12:31

Rusty wire caught a bent dog tag,

dull metal letters, scratched and ragged.

Cold in my palm, a forgotten name,

a pet’s lost echo, a fading flame.


Dirt smudged the years it kept,

a silent story buried deep.

Fingertips trace the worn design,

a pulse of absence, sharp and fine.


The garden holds the metal ghost,

a memory I miss the most.

That tag, a weight beneath the soil,

a quiet knot of love and toil.

#loss #memory #mortality #pet remembrance #war veteran symbolism

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